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Judy Malloy

Diary entries of a woman's relationship with a German hacker. Underlined spaces delineate links, a clean format, these type of links not as disconcerting, not breaking-up the text as much as underlined links. Home link at the bottom. Lexia's short, most would fit on a page. Colors of the background seem to show themes, but I'm not sure.

Several threads run through the work:

Gweneth's curiosity about men, a desire to be among them as another man. I have a friend who once dressed-up as a man, strapped down her breasts and stuffed cloth in her crotch. Tried to pass for a day. She was typed as a gay man, considered it a success. Maybe if we were to switch bodies for say, a month, yes, a month would be perfect, then we'd know so much more about ourselves and others.

Computers are ubiquitous and accepted, part of the life of this person, important, but secondary to the story, no social commentary, no fear of technology. One interesting scene, a marriage proposal, the couple is face to face, yet they use a computer to propose and accept marriage, an intimate moment, yet mediated by a machine, it could have been on a piece of paper, or by word, a need for a protected distant between two people, a distance that never closes.

Old hardware still doing new things. I laugh when I see software and hardware touted as "The Next New Thing" and it's just a rehash of something done on an older operating system, a slower machine or a mainframe. One scene, in a barn full of old computers and parts, really struck me. Some 25 years ago I found the end of an old harpoon in an abandoned barn in Maine. Still have it. Behind my house is a shed housing what I call "My Computer Museum" housing an Apple II (#276), Vic 20, Commodore 64, four or five Amigas, and boxes and boxes of boards and disks and books and zines. Food for the mice. Maybe someday it will be discovered as some treasure trove of history, an old way of doing things, like that harpoon.

This piece worked for me, it has a pleasing design, I found places that invoked references and thoughts within me and Judy has been open for contact and questions. This fulfills what I see as three criteria for successful hypertext:

good writing

a design and link structure that doesn't drive you crazy

some sort of feedback or interface between the reader and either the work or it's author

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