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bud
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10/10/2008
00:55:16
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 Subject: lift up your voices oh lord
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on the second sunday of each month
i like to drive to the north coast of
the great lake superior & eat some
warm fried chicken i buy at the last
outpost until the next town up the shore
someday i'm planning on making it there
pick up some hot fried chicken somewhere
cause they gotta have it right? & stop
someplace on the way home instead
sorta reverse the playback of every second
sunday seeing gods either gonna be nearby
or not who can tell & furthermore control it
not like thats what i'm doin it for
i do it just because
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tom
Poet
10/10/2008
06:22:08
| RE: lift up your voices oh lord
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ah, the north shore
where the winter shaped rocks
are the shapes of reclining women
along the beaches at Brighton
and north - you can get chicken
in two harbors drive north
stop at Betty's for pie
drive north - watch for falling
rocks at Silver Cliff that my
daughter climbed this fall to
figure out how to keep those
rocks from falling on drivers
lost in reverie, lost in the
beauty of that treacherous lady
Superior, as they drove north
to the falls at Gooseberry
where leaves and water tumble
yeah, do it just because
good poem, bud
good thoughts
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luc
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10/18/2008
01:48:16
| RE: lift up your voices oh lord
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i have:
the wizard of oz being remade
all matrixed out the yin-yang
in a few years from now when
movie making technology improves
to include the full five sense perceptions,
where you can tast fried chicken
on the screen and not just in this poem.
i have the hop skip jumpy jump
of dorothy's fabulous because
because because because because...
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bud
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10/18/2008
02:21:46
| RE: lift up your voices oh lord
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because of the wonderful things he does?
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luc
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10/18/2008
02:33:57
| RE: lift up your voices oh lord
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naw, currently "he" is on sabbatical - in the remake the "he" changes to "we've"
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luc
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10/18/2008
02:34:58
| RE: lift up your voices oh lord
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rather;
he does to we've done
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bud
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10/18/2008
18:37:02
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ah yes...because of the wonderful things we've done.
perfect.
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ron
Poet
10/22/2008
07:16:18
| RE: lift up your voices oh lord
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bump
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