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ron
Poet
5/11/2008
17:16:30
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 Subject: driving thru a hard afternoon rain
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quite a ride back
home from my mom's
up 79. seek stereo:
interesting celtic
for a while
then old dylan "do
you take me for such
a fool..."
& i'm calling truckers
cocksuckers
our windshield wipers
slap fast but there's
too much spray
as they pass
or we pass
& no other music
worth noting
plays
goddamn cocksuckers
in huge mobile homes
pulling an acura locked to a trailer
assholes who
don't turn
on their lights, dingfuckingbats
the intensity of
the rain, in retrospect,
nearly to the point
to think
pull over & wait
it was a
dramatic
drive in a
low red taurus
like curled
inside a blood-filled tuba
somebody's playing:
An hour & a half
Then entering home
Victory, the happy cats & dog
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korn
Poet
5/11/2008
19:02:52
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good poem.
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Bart
Poet
5/12/2008
17:11:43
| RE: driving thru a hard afternoon rain
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I hate driving in the rain on the interstate too.
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